Jen Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 I just had to come and see what you had written. I'm not normally a JM fic fanatic but this is just so beautifully written. You really create a calming atmosphere and the build up to the diagnosis is great. A really touching ending too. I guess it seems the right thing for Jack to do. It was all so emotional. Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 I agree with Jen. The beginning was also very catching. I read the first lines, and then I couldn't stop, I had to finish. And the build-up to the diagnosis was, like Jen said, great The ending was so touching and sad It was very Romeo and Juliet Well done. Hopefully I'll have the possibility to read more of your stories Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 That was just so sweet. A sad but perfect ending to the one shot Hope you write more one shots or fics Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaitieL Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Thanks for the comments guys. Nice to see that someone read it and actually liked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Well, what's not to like about it? By the way, just let me know when you want it moved Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 * wipes away tears * I think that's one of the saddest fics I've ever read. The end was so moving! Great oneshot! It was very well written. Once you start reading it, you can't stop. Looking forward to read your other fics. Actually, I already read This Old Love but you knew that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channy!!! Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 At first the title drew me into reading it as it was such a Naley title... It was really beautifully written probably one of the best I've read, it was perfect.. SO SAD but great! You should write more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Beautiful. Just beautiful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muffincake Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 That was so beautifully written, I cried! loved the bit about the puppy too!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 aww that was so sad. you had me in tears at the end. absolutly beautifly written too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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