beckyboo Posted May 7, 2007 Report Share Posted May 7, 2007 Story Title: Fooling who? Type of story: Short Fic Main Characters: Jack and Martha and Lucas and Ash BTTB rating: T Genre: Mixture Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: V/D SC L Summary: What happens when all four love different people Thanks to Sian for the name Ok I know you will all hate me Tasha more than others but here goes: Preview Jack was lying in bed next to Martha and was thinking of the days events. He had seen Martha and his brother Lucas sitting down in a secluded part of the beach acting like a perfect couple, he should have felt angry and hurt and upset because the woman he loved was having an affair with his own brother but he didt he felt…..Happy. You see Martha and Jack was not the most perfect of relationships and well they were now both regretting the decisions they had made because you see: Martha was in love with Lucas and Jack was in love with someone else but didt know how to break the news to her. Jack and Ash had been friends since they were little boys and then when they grew up to be teenagers they started a secret relationship but then Jack had to be transferred he thought he was a teenager at the time and all that would change. He then met his wife; she was the most stunning thing he had ever seen so of course he thought she could turn him straight. Then Ash turned up and everything changed Jack was terrified of Martha finding out his secret that he proposed to her and she didt have the heart to say no even though he heart lay with someone else. Their wedding was perfect they had no interruptions in the church like both Jack and Martha thought there would be the whole day ran smoothly; Ash and Lucas were both stood beside Jack each of the dieing to speak out for the one they loved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted May 7, 2007 Report Share Posted May 7, 2007 I love it! We need flashbacks to their relationship Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*purple*star* Posted May 7, 2007 Report Share Posted May 7, 2007 Omg brilliant!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aejdude Posted May 7, 2007 Report Share Posted May 7, 2007 It's different i give you that. Would want to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 7, 2007 Report Share Posted May 7, 2007 I hate you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted May 7, 2007 Report Share Posted May 7, 2007 I hate you I love you too!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted May 8, 2007 Report Share Posted May 8, 2007 I love this so far I want to read more Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 8, 2007 Report Share Posted May 8, 2007 THere isnt going to be anymore, if there is i will block Becky and never talk to her again. Or i could just not read it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted May 8, 2007 Report Share Posted May 8, 2007 Don't forget who sent the dvd and fancard to you. I'm gonna go search for it now and get it back because anyone who writes cr@p like this dusn't deserve it. I hate you Becky! Never speaking to you again. That better be a bloody oneshot. Now I know why there hasn't been a update on your other fic you were to busy writing this rubbish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted May 8, 2007 Report Share Posted May 8, 2007 Short and sweet Its diffrent, but thats what I really like about it xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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