emmasi Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 lol.... that was so random... Um, good to see that you're having a go, but you seriously need to improve your writing. I mean that generally, as in spelling and grammar. It can be very difficult to understand what you're on about sometimes. Anyway, that was fun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eden Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 I agree with what Emmasi said. It is good that you are trying, but have a bit more of a try with grammar, spelling. It is hard to understand what you were on about. (As emmasi said). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 but you seriously need to improve your writing. I mean that generally, as in spelling and grammar. I agree Maybe you should get a proof reader. But still, I liked the fic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 Awww, so sad....do you want kme to be your Proofer!? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 Robbie: Me and mum had the best and wicked time together and she is a hot mum and never I though the day when I helping mum making Chocolate cake and I tip it upside down on my head and I will never forget you mum and I love you That was great Wilz. But, I dont think Robbie would refrer to his dead mother as hot mum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 Oh, one more thing....was that a oneshot, or are you continuing...? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 Robbie: Me and mum had the best and wicked time together and she is a hot mum and never I though the day when I helping mum making Chocolate cake and I tip it upside down on my head and I will never forget you mum and I love you That was great Wilz. But, I dont think Robbie would refrer to his dead mother as hot mum I agree Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emmasi Posted November 11, 2006 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 Heh, really? I wouldn't put it past Robbie to say that at all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lynd~ Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 ^^You beat me to it.I wouldn't put it past him,he's a cheecky bugger! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted November 11, 2006 Report Share Posted November 11, 2006 Good try, I agree with emmasi and eden, but good effort, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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