fruitburstroxy Posted May 16, 2006 Report Share Posted May 16, 2006 Awesome! Continue please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lynhay Posted May 16, 2006 Report Share Posted May 16, 2006 This is great - can't wait to find out more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted May 16, 2006 Report Share Posted May 16, 2006 (edited) All i can say is what an intruiguing and explosive start! You have real talent for not only writing but also making up all these fab plots! I don't know you do it! Please update really really soon - i want to see Martha's reaction! Oh yea and one more thing... how could you just leave it there?! Meany...lol Edited May 16, 2006 by jackandmartha!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted May 16, 2006 Report Share Posted May 16, 2006 Love it please post more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 16, 2006 Report Share Posted May 16, 2006 Yep i agree...you can't leave it there; it is too good, in a good way lol i laughed so hard at Jack talking to the coffee machine, i just imagined him using the same tone of voice as he used that day at the races when he phoned Martha "Martha darling, its Jack speaking, where are you?"...i imagined Jack saying something like "Why thank you ever so much Mr coffee maker, how kind of you." and in front of a room full of patients too lol that was hilarious lol Well written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted May 17, 2006 Report Share Posted May 17, 2006 Excellent fic. Can't wait to read some more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted May 17, 2006 Report Share Posted May 17, 2006 This is fantastic, you are a really good writer. Please update again soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kerttu Posted May 17, 2006 Report Share Posted May 17, 2006 It super. I love it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted May 17, 2006 Report Share Posted May 17, 2006 WOW that's great can' t wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollipop_lover11 Posted May 17, 2006 Report Share Posted May 17, 2006 good job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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