~Angel~ Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 I'm writing this new fanfiction. It is set when Martha sleeps with Jack's best mate, Ash, while Jack is in hospital. I am NOT continueing my other fanfics apart from 'Love and Hate'. the first chapter will be up later on today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Looking forward to the first chapter I really really don't like Martha right now! never thought I would say that!! Aww your never updating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxgulcanxx Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Sounds good, can't wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Sounds Good. Looking forward to the 1st chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Angel~ Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Here's chapter 1, Hope you like it! Chapter 1 “You slept with Ash!” Jack shouted. “I didn’t know. I was…” Martha stuttered. “Get the Hell out off my life!” Jack yelled. Tears fell down Martha’s cheeks and she ran out. Jack lay back on the bed and he felt tears fall down his own cheeks. *** “So…” Tony said. “Are you going to be able to walk?” Jack didn’t hear him as he was thinking about Martha and Ash. “Jack?” Tony said. “Sorry?” Jack asked. “What’s up Mate?” Tony asked. Jack shook his head. “Nothing,” Jack muttered. “It’s got to be something,” Tony said. 2Well it’s not!” Jack shouted. “Leave me alone!” Tony left. *** Jack was out of hospital a week later. He was able to walk slightly. He limped into the diner. “Good Morning Constable!” Colleen said. “How are you feeling?” “Fine thanks,” Jack said. He saw Alf looking at him awkwardly. Alf glanced at the window, Jack followed his glance. He was surprised to see Martha and Ash involved in a long kiss. He felt sick. He turned to leave. Martha pulled away from the kiss just in time to see him go. She bit her lip. *** “Come in!” Sam said. Jack came in. “Hi, I’m Jack Holden,” Jack said. “I’m Samantha. But you can call me Sam for short,” Sam said. “You’re here for the Physio therapist, I take?” Jack nodded. An hour passed. “Look at the time!” Sam exclaimed. “I think we’ve had enough for today.” “Yeah,” Jack muttered. “Bye, see you next week,” Sam said. “Bye,” Jack said. *** “Ash let me go!” Martha screamed. Ash lifted her up. Martha giggled. Jack walked past them. Martha noticed he was looking happier than usual. She saw a girl approach him. They looked extremely happy. “Martha?” Ash broke her away from her thoughts. “Yes?” Martha asked. “Are you with me?” Ash asked. “Yeah, I just…” she began. “You’re looking at Jack?” Ash said. “Sorry, It’s just,” Martha began again. “Let’s go, I’ll drop you home,” Ash muttered. *** “One beer please,” Jack said. “Sure,” Martha said handing him a bottle. “Hi Jack,” Sam walked up. “We’ve seen each other three times today,” “Hi,” Jack grinned. Martha couldn’t help feeling slightly jealous. “Martha this is Sam, Sam this is Martha,” Jack said. “Hi, I’ve heard quite a lot about you,” Sam said. Jack and Sam started talking. Martha was sure she saw Jack give Sam the smile that she used to get, specially. R&R! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxgulcanxx Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Great chapter, Martha is jealous...didn't take her long to realise that lol update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Good first chapter, can't wait to read more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash_mc Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Fantastic first chapter! Grrr..sam and ash! Ash..pfftt..trying to rob my name! Ain't going 2 happen ashy boy! Please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Please make Ash evil?? lol Sam sounds ncie.... I feel so sorry for Jack. Martha.. Martha who? Good chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted October 17, 2006 Report Share Posted October 17, 2006 Yay, i've been waiting for a fic with J/S and A/M yay. Great start. Take that Martha, Go Jack and Sam. <3 them Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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