dr kimberley Posted September 18, 2006 Report Share Posted September 18, 2006 Characters: Alf- Alf is retired and lives in the apartment above the diner with his wife Colleen. Amanda- Amanda is Unemployed and her daughter and son don't like her. Brad- Brad is the Deputy principal and is married to Sally. Cassie- Cassie is a Teacher and is going out with Drew. Colleen- Colleen is Retired and married to Alf. Dan- Dan is the School counciller and lives with Leah, Ryan an VJ. Drew- Drew is th Manager of the gym, is going out with Cassie and lives at Irene's. Jack- Jack is a Detective and is married to Martha with two children. Leah- Leah is the owner of the diner and is happily married. Martha- Martha is currently on maternity leave. Robbie- Robbie is single and owns Beth's old house with Tony. He owns a boat service. Rachel- Rachel is a Doctor and Phyciatrist, she is single and lives at Amanda's old apartment. Sally- Sally ia a Teacher and is married to Brad. Cassie and Pippa live there. Tony- Tony is widowed and lives with Robbie. Irene- Irene and Paris are dating and Drew lives at the beach house. Irene is still at the diner. Ryan- Ryan is a rebel of a teenager but is very nice. VJ- VJ is a kind teenager and always helps his mother Pippa- Pippa is the sweetest girl who's ambition is to be a doctor. ******************************************************************** (Summer Bay high) Brad- I hope you have learnt not to throw stink bombs down the corridor Ryan. Ryan- Yes I wont do it again. Hey, are you annoyed Paris has taken your job as principal? Brad- No deputy is good enough for me. (Cassie walks in) Cassie- Sorry to interupt Brad, Ryan you are not to arrive late to my class today. Understood? Ryan- Yes ms Turner. Cassie- Good, carry on. ******************************************************************** (Amanda's house) Amanda- I hate Belle, I hate belle, I HATE BELLE! (Someone knocks on the door) Amanda- GO AWAY! Leah- Amanda, please open up I want to help you. Amanda- I said GO AWAY! (Amanda throws her glass at the door? Leah- Ok, ok I'm going. ******************************************************************** (The diner) Irene- How did you go love? Leah- No good. She was really angry. I wish I could do more to help. Irene- Don't put yourself down darl, you've done all you can. Leah- Yeah but she can't keep drinking her sorrows away. Irene- I know. ******************************************************************** (The apartment) Colleen- Alf, lunch is ready. Alf- Ok, I'll be there in a minute. Colleen- If you don't hurry up your lunch will go cold. Alf- Flammin heck women I said I'll be there in a minute and I will ok! Colleen- Don't get cranky at me. I'm going for a walk. Alf- Bye ******************************************************************** (The warf) Colleen- Hello Robbie. Robbie- Hey Colleen. How are you? Colleen- Good thanks. Just had a blue with the husband. Robbie. Oh ok. (Robbie's phone rings) Robbie- Excuse me for a second Colleen. Hello. Oh hey Tony. What? I'll be there right away. Sorry Colleen I've gotta go. Colleen- Is everything alright Robbie? Robbie- No time to explain. Bye colleen. Colleen- Toodles. ******************************************************************** (Summer Bay High) Cassie- Alright class settle down. (Cassie sits on a pin) Cassie- OUCH! WHO PUT THIS PIN HER. TURN YOURSELF IN AT ONCE. RIGHT, WE ARE NOT LEAVING UNTIL YOU SHOW YOURSELF. Ryan- Alright it was me. Cassie- HOW DARE YOU! Ryan- It was only a joke. God! Cassie- Not to me it wasn't. Report to Mr Burnett's office at once! Ryan- NO! (The whole class is shocked.) Next time on home and away: .What will happen with Ryan? . Why did Tony call Robbie? . Will Amanda admit she has a problem and how will Irene help her? I hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 18, 2006 Report Share Posted September 18, 2006 Hey Dr Kim, i know you from HAAC And i've read this fic. Hehe, your posting it here now. Good on ya. Well i'll re-read it here Great start Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel15784 Posted September 18, 2006 Report Share Posted September 18, 2006 Great Start please update soon its excellent how did beth die?>> what happened with amanda and the kids???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 18, 2006 Report Share Posted September 18, 2006 Great Start please update soon its excellent how did beth die?>> what happened with amanda and the kids???? Oh my gosh I hope you didn't kill Beth,Lucas,Mattie,Kim and Tasha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr kimberley Posted September 18, 2006 Report Share Posted September 18, 2006 ^^Beth is the only one out of those two that have died and she died of a brain hemeraige (How ever you spell it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted September 18, 2006 Report Share Posted September 18, 2006 That was really good Please udate soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr kimberley Posted September 19, 2006 Report Share Posted September 19, 2006 Chapter 2 (Summer Bay High) Cassie- I beg your pardon? Ryan- I said No! Cassie- You will do as I tell you Ryan now go. Ryan- You can't make me. Pippa- Come on Ryan, just listen to Ms Turner. Cassie- It's ok Pippa I can handle it. ( Sally walks past) Sally- Is everything alright? Cassie- Ryan is refusing to go to Mr Burnett. Sally- What happened? Cassie- Ryan put a pin on my chair. Sally- Ryan that's not very nice. Why don't you come with me to the office? Ryan- Fine. ******************************************************************** (The gym) Drew- How can I help you Colleen? Colleen- I would like to buy a membership. Drew- Alright it is $200 per year. Colleen- Ok I'll pay in cash. (Colleen pulls $200 out of her purse) Drew- Here is your membership. Colleen- I'd like to start on the weights thanks. Drew- Why do you want to build up your muscles? Colleen- I have a wrestling match against Madge Wilking in a week. ******************************************************************** (Paris's office) Paris- Thank you for bringing Ryan in Sally. Sally- That's fine. (Sally walks out) Paris- Why did you put a pin on Ms Turners chair. Ryan- Because she is a cow! Paris- Watch your attitude Ryan! Ryan- Just telling it how it is. Paris- Your suspened for a week. Ryan- WHAT! Paris-(smirks) Just telling it how it is. ******************************************************************** (Tony and Robbie's house) Tony- I'm glad you came so fast. Robbie- Who would trash our house? Tony- Maybe the stalker. She's come back alive 10 times. Robbie- Oh god! (Jack arrives) Tony- Thanks for coming mate. Jack- It's fine. Do you know who could've done this? Tony- No idea. Robbie- I have no clue. Jack- Is there anything missing? Tony- Not that I can see. Except a picture of Robbie that hung on the wall. Jack- Ok we'll have to look around. ******************************************************************** (Amanda's house) Irene- Amanda open up! Amanda- Go away Irene. Irene- NO! You need help and i will not leave until you face it. Amanda- You will leave when I tell you. Irene- You are an alcaholic. I want to help you. Amanda- I am not an alcaholic now **** off! ******************************************************************** (Diner) Leah- How did you go? Irene- No good. She is very angry. We need to get someone who will be able to talk sense to her. (Dan walks in with Ryan) Leah- What are you doing from school early? Dan- Ryan has been suspended for a week. Leah- What? Why? Dan-He put a pin on Cassie's chair and then had an attitude about it. Leah- Ryan! That is not acceptab;e behaviour. Ryan- You'll get over it. Dan- Watch your mouth! Your are not going to stay home during you suspension. Ryan- Where am I going to go then? Dan- You're going to work at the diner isn't he Leah? Leah- Yep. Ryan- That is so unfair! Leah- Anyway, Dan we need your help. Dan- How? Leah- Amanda is drinking her sorrows away and is getting out of control. Dan- I'll se what I can do. ******************************************************************** (Hospital) Rachel- What a boring day. Nothing is happening. (Suddenly a bed comes in with Colleen in it) Rachel- What happened? Paramedic- Mrs Smart tried to lift weights but it was to much of a strain for her heart. Rachel- Put her in that room. Drew- Will she be alright? Next time on Home and away . Will Colleen survive? . Is Zoe back again? . What tradgedy happens in Summer Bay? . Can Dan get through to Amanda? . Which ex resident comes back and will they stay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 19, 2006 Report Share Posted September 19, 2006 Awww...poor Colleen, i hope shes alright. Ryan is so naughty, and poor Amanda i think i know who trashed Tony and Rob's house, but i cant say coz it'll give it away Great chapter though PLeae update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted September 19, 2006 Report Share Posted September 19, 2006 omgness I love this fic!! Please post more soon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted September 19, 2006 Report Share Posted September 19, 2006 Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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